It’s Friday again – which should be great news, not only because I don’t work Fridays, but also because it’s Friday Fictioneers. Unfortunately, though, I’m not feeling too great today so my offering is… well, frankly pathetic. But I’ve struggled on and dug up 100 words which sort of make sense, because I refuse to be beaten by a stupid bug or whatever it is I’ve got. Anyway, enough moaning, on with Friday Fictioneers!
For those who don’t know, this is a challenge to write a 100 word story from a picture prompt. It’s hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, and anyone can play. Thanks for hosting, Rochelle!
Here’s the picture:
And here’s my tiny tale:
Sick (Based On A True Story)
I’m sick. Bang! I’m trying to sleep because my body really needs sleep and my brain has stopped working. Bang! But I can’t sleep because it’s New Year and everyone’s having fireworks parties. Bang! Every few seconds. Bang! It’s so unfair. My nose is red raw and my bed looks like a snow scene, only it’s not snow it’s tissues. Bang! I’d make a tissue snowman if I could be bothered, but I can’t because I’m too sick. And anyway I don’t have a carrot or a hat.
Or a clever ending to this little tale. Because I’m sick. Bang!
(100 words)
Click the blue frog to read more stories from other fictioneers. They’re probably a lot better than this one 🙂 (And I promise to read them all as soon as I feel better!)
Well I think you did very well for a sick person. I know how irritating it is when all you want to do is sleep and people keep letting off fireworks. Hope you’re feeling better soon.
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Thanks Sandra, feeling a bit better now.
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I’m sorry you are sick. You did very well even if you are sick. Bang! Hope you get to feeling better soon.
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Thanks Jackie – glad you enjoyed it. Am on the mend 🙂
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You may be sick, but you came up with a clever way to make us feel the misery and frustration! Very good tale, or vignette, or whatever. Bang!
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Thank you – I was feeling miserable and frustrated – I promise to try and be a bit cheerier next week though 😀
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Well… I’d say you ended this one with a BANG! 😉 Hope you feel better soon!
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Thanks – Bang! feeling much better after all these lovely comments!
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It was refreshingly honest and I liked the way you talk clearly and directly to the reader. Thanks. Sorry you’re crook.
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Dear El,
I’ll try to tread softly and not wake you with a bang. Thanks for rallying enough to write this piece. Oh…and very clever ending. 😉
Shalom and get well,
Rochelle
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Thank you for your kind comments, Rochelle. glad you liked the ending – I was only writing with half a brain, though. Next week I hope to be back to full brain function.
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I was going to use the “b” word, as in “You went out with a b—-” but since it’s already been used more than once, I’ll simply say you didn’t just do the best you could, you did it “well.” Hope you are, soon.
janet
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Thanks janet. Your comment gave me a much needed laugh 😀
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Good! Hope you’re feeling better today.
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Feel better soon. A real snowman is so preferable to the tissue kind! I enjoyed the way you portrayed your frustration with the ‘bang’ word.
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thanks train-whistle. I agree about the snowman. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You use what you have. Write from experience, and you did that very well. Ron
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Thanks Ron – I didn’t have much to work with this week as my brain was so foggy – glad you liked it!
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nothing more annoying than trying to sleep through a party! A realistic story.
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Absolutely! Thanks for your kind comments.
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Not having a carrot or hat was pretty damn clever. Sick or not… good story.
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Thanks Ted. I liked the carrot and hat line too. glad you liked it.
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That was funny. sorry your sick. I am the end of mine so I know how you feel Bang!
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Glad you’re getting better. And so am I, thank goodness. Thanks for commenting.
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Yay to feeling better!
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completely disagree that you don’t have a clever ending. bang! well done.
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Thanks Rich – it did feel like a bit of a pathetic entry this week, but from all the lovely comments it seems I didn’t do so badly after all. Maybe I should try getting sick more often 😀
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Pretty much how I’ve been feeling for past two weeks. Your story is pretty great if you ask me, I know that feeling so well. Parties, music and fireworks everywhere and all you want to do is take a pill and sleep for a year. Hope you feel better soon!
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Oh rubbish, please ignore the glaring error in that comment. Hiding away in shame.
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It’s cool – I edited it out – no one need ever know 🙂
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Dear El,
GET WELL NOW!
Aloha,
Doug
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Blimey – all that shouting worked. I feel loads better!
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El, I’ve been feeling sick, too, lately! I hope you feel better soon. Bang! I just couldn’t resist. Nice job.
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Thanks Bumble. It must be the season for sickness. Hope you feel better too.
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Hope you are better now.
See you back with a BANG this Friday! 🙂
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All better now – so I’ll have no excuses this week!
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